Year 3 @ Brookburn

The boy died spookly .

My word that was quick Martha! Think about the word spooky. If I wanted to change that to an adverb, what happens to the y at the end?

I strolled happily to the park.
I ran quickly outside into the deserted playground.
I balanced carefully on the wooden bench.

cautiously,the boy opened the door…

Awesome sentence George! I love how you have used an adverb as a sentence opener! You have created a lot of suspense there.

I slowly got out of bed and sleepily got dressed into my school clothes.

The baby was cried loudly.
The horse galloped quickly.

The balloon poped un exspectedly.

Ancshly I walked into the creepy celler.

I spoke shily

I looked very carfully.

I ate my dinner hungerly.

The silly pink bat hung upside down sleepily.

The baby cried loudly.
The horse galloped quickly.

Longingly, I looked in the monsoon dress shop window.

My Dad hungrily ate some peanut butter on toast.

I crossed the road carefully.

I loved you Ideas

WELL DONE

Peanut butter on toast! Yum!

Great work everyone, I am really impressed by all your efforts. If you like, why don’t you have a go at using adverbs in different parts of your sentences?
You could even rewrite someone else’s sentence in a different way. Don’t forget to be positive and helpful when talking about each other’s work.

For example,

I really like your sentences Myarr. Why not try

Carefully, I balanced on the wooden bench.

I wated nervously to go on stage.

The guinea pigs wated pashently for some hay.

I talk randomly.

I stared into the sweet shop longingly.

I played the piano tunefully.

I walked in the line sensibly.

The dog was dreaming happily.

The man ran quickly for the bus.

Carefully, I walked across the busy road.

Sleepily I am doing my homework.

Carefully, I walked on the ice.

Alice you should put a comma after ancshly.

Well done Ursula, can you explain to Alice why she needs a comma after anxiously?

My cat is cuddly

I play happily with my cat.

I play crazily on my Xbox360.

My dad snores loudly!

Jealously, I looked at your brilliant sentences with adverbs.
I will moan angrily(ish) at my class for not contributing wonderfully to our own adverb blog.

Mine too Matthew!

Fiendishly, I ‘borrowed’ our homework idea from your blog Mr Sumner! I am glad I did though, as I have been happily sitting here reading Year 3′s fantastic ideas.

Amy did her homework sleepily and went to bed.

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I love your idea Amy!!! This is my favourite idea of yours.

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suddenly,my computer broke down.[True.]

It was back Surpriseingly in 2 days. [True as well.]

I got on to world 3 on New super Mario bros extraordinarily.[True agian!]

Happily, Mr Alderdice stole Mr Sumner’s outstanding ideas.

The girl skipped to school merrily. The boy shouted loudly. The mum worked quickly. The dad joked funnily. My dad tickles me every night crazily. Quietly the girl walked to Miss Ferris’ office. Strangely, all these sentences have adverbs in them!

Miserably Jim sat down to do his homework.
Sam sat down at the tea table angrily and flicked a pea at his baby brother.

The horse jumped carefully over the pole.

The man walked slowly in to the shop.

Impatiently Benedict waited for his porridge .

Cheekily, the black and white cat called Whiskers chased the little mouse. But cleverly, the mouse found a shoe and hid in it. Stupidly, mum put her foot in the shoe “AAAAAAAAAAAAAA” sceamed mum. Jordan bravely, picked up the shoe with the mouse and threw it out of the house. Quietly, Whiskers sat down on his blanket and fell into a deep sleep.

…hungrily he put his head in his porridge .

…And greedily ate it up. Unsurprisingly, he ended up
with a mucky face!

…it looked very funny until he carefully wiped it off. Then angrily said: “stop laughing!’

later,he waited longingly for a cheese sandwich.
And it happened all over again.

Happily the girl opened her birthday present.
The boy sang heartily.
The girls played merrly.
Orlaith listened contently while her daday read her a story.
The chuckle brothers hid quietly underneath the bed.
The Hen looked funnily whilst she was laying an egg.

Yesterday I played football brilliantly.

My Dad shouted at me loudly because he had to clean my dirty shoes after I had walked in dog muck.

When Man City scored I cheered loudly, but when they lost I groaned miserably.

My sister laughed quietly as she watched a clown.

The clown fell over into the pit of snails slimely.

The boy was scared of the bird in the park.

Happily mr Alderdice walked home on a friday night

At swimming I kicked my legs fiercly.

I splashed noisily.

sleepily, off I go to bed

Quickly grabbing my school bag, I zoomed through the front door, which slammed with a deafening BANG!

As the lion pantered towards me, breathing cautiously. And licking his lips hungrly, I was so scared I coudn’t move. My hand shaked nervously. I thougt it was coming towards me… then suddenlyit jumped onto the boy next to me! And as he jumped he roared loudly!